Script changes

Richard and I had a long script meeting yesterday evening and I stayed up till late trying to implement some of the possible changes. I've been struggling with the writing because you think it all works and then someone picks a hole in the plot or it's not really saying what you wanted it to say, then you question what is it you're saying anyway! Phew!

Anyway, I've been struggling with endings and the final climax, but still not 100% there. What I need is some time just to mull over the options with a clear head.